Morning ripples breathe
Sunshine and water mending
June meditation
or
Lake meditation
Morning ripples
Just breathe
or
Summer day riptide
Swimming not recommended
Dreams pull me under
And one more:
Rip Van Winkle-
short story of a long sleep
There’s no mending time
the second one is my favorite but I love that each one had such a different emotion/mood from each other although playing off the same words
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The second is my favorite, too, but I felt I was cheating, since it is not the traditional 5-7-5. I really have gotten better at not worrying so about exact syllable count except for this RonovanWrites prompt. Thanks for commenting.
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Oh, fun! (I, too, find myself striving to fit the syllables to the poem for this challenge.)
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