Singing spring awake
With their narrow minded songs
The sun and sparrow
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Singing spring awake
With their narrow minded songs
The sun and sparrow
sketchingwords.com 
I’m happy the sun and sparrow are singing and spring has come awake. I like the way your haiku has echoes — first line “singing” echoes by second line “songs — second line “narrow” ecohoed by “sparrow”. And all the s’s give it a sing song quality. Like it a lot.
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