RonovanWrites weekly haiku poetry prompt challenge #246

Singing spring awake
With their narrow minded songs
The sun and sparrow

One thought on “RonovanWrites weekly haiku poetry prompt challenge #246

  1. I’m happy the sun and sparrow are singing and spring has come awake. I like the way your haiku has echoes — first line “singing” echoes by second line “songs — second line “narrow” ecohoed by “sparrow”. And all the s’s give it a sing song quality. Like it a lot.

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