Sunrise as lantern
How fast the air and heart beat
September second
or
The air about her
Some temporary golden dream
October lantern
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Both haiku are beautiful! xxx
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Beautiful
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Both the haiku are beautifully crafted
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Thank you for taking the time to comment.
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Love the sunrise pic. (good thing you said sunrise as I would have assumed sunset as I am usually not up that early — although now I am because work lets out at 4:30 am). It’s cool how after I read the haiku, the sun now makes me think of a Japanese lantern floating. Both are lovely autumn haiku
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