Haibun Road/Cactus Haiku challenge

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An hour run in the neighborhood before sunrise is peaceful. Brings peace. Peaceful power. The power of peace. An hour run in the neighborhood before sunrise. Before cars. Before school buses. Before dog walkers. Before striving. Before the sun. The road. The breath. The moon. Before the sun.

Before the sunrise
Road  Breath  Moon  Run  Peace  Power
Before the striving

2 thoughts on “Haibun Road/Cactus Haiku challenge

  1. I love this. it’s a wonderful haibun. I love the way as the paragraph progresses, I feel like the sentences are your steps and breath, going faster and faster.

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